Bee

● original essay ●

“If honeybees vanish from the world, the earth will come to an end in 4 years.” Since Global warming is worsening rapidly I often hear that. It is hard to believe to me, but actually honeybees have started to disappear these days in the world. Is it true that the earth will come to an end?

Though honeybees are disappearing, the numbers of damage from hornets are on the increase in Tokyo. Today, I found the hornet while I was going to the station. It was flying 1 meter above my head. I kept away because I was wearing a black T-shirt and perfume. I had knowledge that hornets attack the people who are wearing black clothes or perfume. Oh, I was doing both. But I didn’t run away from the hornet in a hurry because hornets had a nature to attack something which was moving fast. By the TV news programs, the possibility which is the cause of increasing the numbers of damage from hornets is by Global warming.

Whatever the reason, I didn’t want to get sting by hornets and I will try to keep away from them. Until the breeding season finishes I will pass the other road where I found the hornet today. But we should realize that a civilized society is destroying natural environment of the earth and more.

So, from now on, I should consider environment of the earth more seriously. Because I wanna live on the earth until I die.



● corrected essay ●

Since Global warming is worsening rapidly I often hear that “If honeybees vanish from the world, the earth will come to an end in 4 years.” It is hard to believe to me, but actually these days honeybees have started to disappear in the world. Is it true that the earth will come to an end?

Though honeybees are disappearing, the numbers of damage from hornets are on the increase in Tokyo. Today, I found a hornet while I was going to the station. It was flying 1 meter above my head. I kept away because I was wearing a black T-shirt and perfume. I know that hornets attack people who are wearing black clothes or perfume, and oh, I was wearing both. But I didn’t run away from the hornet in a hurry, because hornets have a nature to attack something that is moving fast. According to the TV news programs, increasing the numbers of damage from hornets possibly caused by Global warming.

Whatever the reason, I didn’t want to get sting by hornets and I will try to keep away from them. Until the breeding season finishes I will pass the other road where I found the hornet today. But we should realize that our civilized (developed / industrialized) society is destroying the natural environment of the earth and more.

So, from now on, I should consider environment of the earth more seriously. Because I want to live on the earth until I die.